- I like the changes that were made to the hair 'poofs'.
- In your old version, I liked how Jamal inhales, then exhales. Put that back in.
- I also like that you tried to be more sensitive to line-weight. Keep doing that.
- She's definitely looking at him more now at the end which is good.
- There are still some issues with Camella's face but I'll go into the shot and tweak the key frames myself once you finish coloring the shot.
The first couple shots always take the longest because we're getting into a groove.
* This was the only version of this shot on the ftp that I could find, although I know you've done a second pass on it since this one doesn't have toenails.
Tonight, can you upload your folder for this shot as well? I'll edit this post once I see the new version.
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